A Magical Fairyland

`` A Magical Fiaryland ``

                   

One day while strolling thru~the forest green
to my surprise ,fairies ,I happened to see
dancing they were, among lofty trees
and some of the charming little creatures
I noticed two fluttering along
the stepping stones,by the river blue

O' such a delightful day,the sun shone gold
but are fairies real? no, is what I've been told.
so pondering if it's true, I asked,
'hey lil' fairies up among the tree
are you for real?
or do my tired eyes decieve?'

They soon came gathering with their wings
weaving a circle around me
about nine divine lil' creatures cute as they could be
then sprinkling golden fairy dust upon my hair
they answered 'yes, my dear, we're really here'

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!

and when the starry night falls
softly in our forest deep
we collect the stardust in our silver wings
and steal magic from the moon
for you see, we fairies, never sleep
we follow the flight of our own merry tune

we're magic you know,
yet real as can be
and tho~we may be a wee bit small
we'll appear to all
who are willing to see'


Well, There must have been something in
their sparkling fairee dust
for I drifted off into a magical fairyland dream
and when I awoke
I was no longer in the fairy's forest green

Reviews

[Gandré]

oh you have it intus. Wonderfullly written, you must keep on writing this.

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!----------this is my stanza. it is pedante of childhood.

[Jessica Fox]

I loved this poem and the picture was cute as well, such a wonderful job with the visuals and flow of the work. Excellent poem my friend.

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Something about your poems make me want to sing. I loved this poem it made me wonderfully glee.

[Brianna Brie]

Light, fun and whimsical piece of writing. It is a delight to read. Descriptive words are wonderful for you painted the forest and its magic perfectly.

[Vera Iconica]

Amazing. You had a few cappitalization probelms, but those are easily fixed.

[Sarah]

This is such a cute and beautiful poem. It's so rare to see optomistic poems nowadays (atleast I can't seem to find them... or write them... >.>;) so good job with that! This is just lovely. (:

[Jaffa Forbes]

very well written, slightly surreal me thinks, but good in that sense.
jaff

[Sheila M]

Very nice! I love all things magical and mystical. I like the way you worded it, as well. Nicely done.

[nokturnal]

Great poem I really want to go to this forest after reading this. Yes there is a few capitalization mistakes but still wonderful none the less. You write such imaginative poems very pleasant to read. Good Luck in the competition.

[Angela S.]

nice poem. I would suggest fixing some of the captilization mistakes, but other than that the poem itself is very sweet.

[desertraven]

reads like a fairytale...pun intended! Very amuzing and entertaining!
Well done.
Sandra :)