A Magical Fairyland

`` A Magical Fiaryland ``

                   

One day while strolling thru~the forest green
to my surprise ,fairies ,I happened to see
dancing they were, among lofty trees
and some of the charming little creatures
I noticed two fluttering along
the stepping stones,by the river blue

O' such a delightful day,the sun shone gold
but are fairies real? no, is what I've been told.
so pondering if it's true, I asked,
'hey lil' fairies up among the tree
are you for real?
or do my tired eyes decieve?'

They soon came gathering with their wings
weaving a circle around me
about nine divine lil' creatures cute as they could be
then sprinkling golden fairy dust upon my hair
they answered 'yes, my dear, we're really here'

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!

and when the starry night falls
softly in our forest deep
we collect the stardust in our silver wings
and steal magic from the moon
for you see, we fairies, never sleep
we follow the flight of our own merry tune

we're magic you know,
yet real as can be
and tho~we may be a wee bit small
we'll appear to all
who are willing to see'


Well, There must have been something in
their sparkling fairee dust
for I drifted off into a magical fairyland dream
and when I awoke
I was no longer in the fairy's forest green

Reviews

[Gandré]

oh you have it intus. Wonderfullly written, you must keep on writing this.

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!----------this is my stanza. it is pedante of childhood.

[thoughts of jade]

congratulations! This is really a great poem!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats a second time on your great winning Poem!

[deeps]

Wow! This is amazing and so wonderful
I really enjoyed this write

[Sean M. Addams]

wow this piece had everything in it ... i can see why this piece has won so many rewards in is amazing write... i starting to wonder if there is anything you can't write about... you really do have talent Fran!!! fav lines...They soon came gathering with their wings
weaving a circle around me
about nine divine lil' creatures cute as they could be
then sprinkling golden fairy dust upon my hair
they answered 'yes, my dear, we're really here'

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Ellen Hammond]

A very enchanting poem, my friend. It's a delightful read.

[Puzzle-bot]

Thanks for enteringit in my contest, though I'm not to obsesed with fairys, I enjoyed it. I love the flow and feel. it's VERY well written

[Adeline]

I love it! Thanks for entering my contest!

[With Each Raindrop Come..]

A very well written poem! I love it! Send more to my next contests!!!!

[Panda]

Wonderfully written, you did a great job on this piece, a lot of imagery =). Thank you for entering it in my contest