A Magical Fairyland

`` A Magical Fiaryland ``

                   

One day while strolling thru~the forest green
to my surprise ,fairies ,I happened to see
dancing they were, among lofty trees
and some of the charming little creatures
I noticed two fluttering along
the stepping stones,by the river blue

O' such a delightful day,the sun shone gold
but are fairies real? no, is what I've been told.
so pondering if it's true, I asked,
'hey lil' fairies up among the tree
are you for real?
or do my tired eyes decieve?'

They soon came gathering with their wings
weaving a circle around me
about nine divine lil' creatures cute as they could be
then sprinkling golden fairy dust upon my hair
they answered 'yes, my dear, we're really here'

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!

and when the starry night falls
softly in our forest deep
we collect the stardust in our silver wings
and steal magic from the moon
for you see, we fairies, never sleep
we follow the flight of our own merry tune

we're magic you know,
yet real as can be
and tho~we may be a wee bit small
we'll appear to all
who are willing to see'


Well, There must have been something in
their sparkling fairee dust
for I drifted off into a magical fairyland dream
and when I awoke
I was no longer in the fairy's forest green

Reviews

[Gandré]

oh you have it intus. Wonderfullly written, you must keep on writing this.

'We are as real as the sky is blue,
we live in the happy forest
dancing and singing neath
the warmth of the sun
fluttering and flying about,
just having fairyland fun!----------this is my stanza. it is pedante of childhood.

[Matching Socks]

I have a weakness for fairy tales.
I delightful poem Fran Marie!

[shallimarRose]

This poem is Very cute.. sR

[ambernaylor]

you did a great job!!!!!!!!!!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much;

[Hibiki]

Congratulation of your winning on the contest!!

I love your idea and your description about fairies
It was wonderfully written, I really wanted to see the fairies for real.

You did the best! ^^

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much;

[Aethereal]

Enchanting story poem! Fairies seem to be serendipitous harbingers of Fate. This being the case, then they really do exist within the mystical undertow of everyday events.

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much;

[dreaming dame]

I am enchanted by tis poem. The wording is delicate, so light and magical.:)

[Yina]

Wow I wanna go there an see them!!:) As my username says, I like fairies:)

[Honourfish]

You paint a beautiful picture! I can loose myself within this poem easily and the magic and fantasy just seep out of it. Great write!

[Just Brooke]

Beautiful Imagery! You are a gifted story teller. excellent poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love this story that you have created. You make the faeries come to life and I can picture them glittering in the sun dancing around you.