^BLOOD^

 

He walks by night and sleeps by day
A nightly curse he does portray
with trails of blood for his display
Are you his prey? His deadly prey!

 

His spell is cast,'neath midnight's moon
Beware! he comes, so very soon
to drink your blood from mortal's wound
'neath midnight's moon, immortal's moon

 

A demon dark,he's straight from hell
to control you with ghastly spells
just when he comes, you cannot tell
he does it well, so very well

 

This Vampire~will steal your soul
in nightmare dreams, he takes control
with no remorse, his mission bold
Beware! your soul, he'll steal your soul

 

His midnight flight,hovers above
stalking your veins,for wanton blood
with blood-red lips, he drains a flood
from sweet warm blood, he Vants your ^BLOOD^

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I like this. I am a vampire of sorts. I don't stalk about in the night and steal souls. I do take blood though. I am a nurse and phlebotomy is just one of the yucky things that I love about my job. :)

I am reading a lot about vampires right now. I do not know if it is because of the time of year or if this is just a common theme on the cafe. I do like this piece though. "stalking your veins,for wanton blood", I think this is my favorite line. I intend to write a piece about vampires or a vampire at some point.

I write in many genres. I do have one horror piece out there that you may be interested in checking out. REDEMPTION DRAWETH NIGH If you check it out, comment on it and let me know what you think.

[Valentine]

I am not into vmpires but his does fit the Halloween approaching and the little ones having a ball getting a bag full of candy..I remember when I was young and did the same ..fun days..God bless Valentine

[Greg the Bard]

More and more the Vampire plays into this month of the Witch. Very well writen with wonderful flow and great image. I like the ending as well. Good read

[GentleGenille]

Very nice write. Lovely rhythm - carries the mood of the vampire's search for blood throughout. Usually this is not what would appeal to me but something about this drew me in. Lol! Great work.

[TL Boehm]

a mechanically solid ryhme and a fitting subject for the season - but what really made me smile was that last line. It brought my childhood back to me in such a wonderful way...he 'vants' your blood...
What a great write.

[Ladysue]

Good imagery and it flowed very smoothly. Great poem. I enjoyed it.

[Vincent Maltese]

i love it. lol, is so cool, lol,lol, nice write. lol

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Hmm, I thought left a review for this one... guess not.


I liked this one especially good for Halloween coming up. Great Write!

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is so cool, The rythem and flow of this piece is music hint at something evil. Like a warning sign of the evil to come. Perfect as a holloween piece. The imagery is wonderful . Great write
Debby

[Amor-de-angel]

Oh Fran Excellent write! I Loved it