^BLOOD^

 

He walks by night and sleeps by day
A nightly curse he does portray
with trails of blood for his display
Are you his prey? His deadly prey!

 

His spell is cast,'neath midnight's moon
Beware! he comes, so very soon
to drink your blood from mortal's wound
'neath midnight's moon, immortal's moon

 

A demon dark,he's straight from hell
to control you with ghastly spells
just when he comes, you cannot tell
he does it well, so very well

 

This Vampire~will steal your soul
in nightmare dreams, he takes control
with no remorse, his mission bold
Beware! your soul, he'll steal your soul

 

His midnight flight,hovers above
stalking your veins,for wanton blood
with blood-red lips, he drains a flood
from sweet warm blood, he Vants your ^BLOOD^

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I like this. I am a vampire of sorts. I don't stalk about in the night and steal souls. I do take blood though. I am a nurse and phlebotomy is just one of the yucky things that I love about my job. :)

I am reading a lot about vampires right now. I do not know if it is because of the time of year or if this is just a common theme on the cafe. I do like this piece though. "stalking your veins,for wanton blood", I think this is my favorite line. I intend to write a piece about vampires or a vampire at some point.

I write in many genres. I do have one horror piece out there that you may be interested in checking out. REDEMPTION DRAWETH NIGH If you check it out, comment on it and let me know what you think.

[Sean M. Addams]

very nicely done ... great imagery and flows very well. love the ending!!!

[Wendy W.]

Very nicely done. I liked your anaglogies. Good job. :)

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

i loved this... especially this time of year...
great writing!

[James Watts]

I love dark poetry...well I guess I would seem odd if I didn't, considering the genre I write in. This was very nice work. Keep at it.

[Autumn Dawn Gorny]

OOOH nice the text and pic add to the hauntiness of the poem.

[BrightEyes]

ahhhh a wonderful vampire poem to hasten us on to Halloween...an enjoyable read...chilling little piece keeping us looking over our shoulders at night!

laura

[Hendrix]

I really enjoyed your poem. It sparked some eriee images in my head. I also chuckled on the last line. As I remember the old footage of vampire films , where the actors spoke in that eastern european accent.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Quick set sail - Vampires.....A great write :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Well told tale - very eerie indeed. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[John Stussy]

Ooooooh, I like this one a lot. Great vampire poem!