^BLOOD^

 

He walks by night and sleeps by day
A nightly curse he does portray
with trails of blood for his display
Are you his prey? His deadly prey!

 

His spell is cast,'neath midnight's moon
Beware! he comes, so very soon
to drink your blood from mortal's wound
'neath midnight's moon, immortal's moon

 

A demon dark,he's straight from hell
to control you with ghastly spells
just when he comes, you cannot tell
he does it well, so very well

 

This Vampire~will steal your soul
in nightmare dreams, he takes control
with no remorse, his mission bold
Beware! your soul, he'll steal your soul

 

His midnight flight,hovers above
stalking your veins,for wanton blood
with blood-red lips, he drains a flood
from sweet warm blood, he Vants your ^BLOOD^

 

Reviews

[Chiquita]

I like this. I am a vampire of sorts. I don't stalk about in the night and steal souls. I do take blood though. I am a nurse and phlebotomy is just one of the yucky things that I love about my job. :)

I am reading a lot about vampires right now. I do not know if it is because of the time of year or if this is just a common theme on the cafe. I do like this piece though. "stalking your veins,for wanton blood", I think this is my favorite line. I intend to write a piece about vampires or a vampire at some point.

I write in many genres. I do have one horror piece out there that you may be interested in checking out. REDEMPTION DRAWETH NIGH If you check it out, comment on it and let me know what you think.

[Legion]

I like the redness of it. Makes you feel he is nearby.

[nokturnal]

Very well written I love it almost makes you want to be his next victim, really portrays a life that is very mysterious one that you really want to experience.

[A.L. James]

A campy spin on an old tale.

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I love this! So well, creepy... I love the imagery you have. Vampires are amazing the perfect halloween piece... Yay Vampires!

[Diana Owen Busy with Li..]

THis is awesome.. I love vampire poems and story.

[T.k. Sutter]

Great imagery, flow and form! This was a dark, yet fun piece.

[Natalie C]

Oh wow, great imagery! You really did a great job at capturing your reader's attention right from the start, drawing them deeper and deeper into the darkened underworld captured brilliantly with your highly suspenseful piece.

Great work, I loved this!

[Yvonne Heidt]

Excellent flow and rhythm! Great job.

[Dead Angel]

cool poem. i love the last line when you go dracula for a minute. great job! :)

[Barry S. Maltese]

What a spooky poem. Vladamir would have been proud of you, but he is now resting with a steak (not porterhouse) in his chest. Nicely written. I like the halloween tone which rings well for this season.