Evil~He Waits`

A familiar darkness beckons to me
casting a deep evil spell 'pon my soul
yet,calm am I~tis my dim fate you see
I am compelled toward him,therefore i go

Luring me forth from blurring midnight dreams
in a sleepwalk trance~i follow his path
he waits in dark shadows with wicked schemes,
hungry-eyed look, with Satan's sin of death

This sullen  prince! of hell's dark light 
has control,'Alas,destiny wields, cause
'I have been before with this devil of the night'
whence, I have danced upon wicked wind's pause

I tell this tale by midnight's pale moonlight
for I know well this devil~he waits in the night 

Reviews

[EmpressPoetess]

"This sullen prince! of hell's dark light has control,'Alas,destiny wields, cause
'I have been before with this devil of the night' whence, I have danced upon wicked wind's pause"....Fran! You have such a vivid imagination!~~I was lured into the dark passion of this, and the dark longing!!~~~Excellent writing!!

[Wild Spirit]

It was very dark but good anyway.

[Fran Marie]

Yes, my dark muse visits me quite frequently...thanks for reading.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very dark, I like it... yes it seems evil is all round us and sometimes in disguise so we must be on guard at all times. I got goosebumps.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

spooky, but i aint askeerd. lol this was just great.

[Karen James]

I love this, punchy and dark.

[Helena]

Oh a lovely 'dark' write Fran Marie. I love going over to the dark side occasionally. lol

Well penned.....captured my attention from word go. You lured me right into the dark and eerie ambiance and gave me cold shivers. Well done!

I'm back here now....glad to be catching up with you again.

Love Helena :)

[Spawn]

thats was an amazing poem. Very descriptive and deep. very well written. good job

[maiarusm]

Dark, dreary, and well-written... a good composition.

[Chiquita]

Evil is here. It lurks and waits. You captured it's essence. Evil can be attractive and draw us in. Though we fear it, we can't help but look. Well done.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

That was good, especially for Halloween coming up. Good Write.