Dont Say Anything!

Dont say you're sorry again.
Those words have lost all
Meaning now

Don't say you'll make it up to me.
you damn well don't
know how.

Don't say you wish I was there.
Because I know it's simply
Not true

Save your breath Mister!
and all your poems, prayers and promises too
for your someone new,who will
Listen to you.

Your new lover, who hangs on to
your every word~Because after all you just
Want to be heard.

Don't say you were wrong
I ignore those B.S. lines you sling!
You Know?
Better yet, Don't say anything!

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

You go GF!!! Absolutely fantastic vent! Sometimes words are empty. Apologies mean nothing when they are overused. This was powerful! Lydia

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This comes close to being the best rant I ever read. It is beautifully written with clear points and dealing with the issues between you. Still it was done with dignity and class, the flow was great as well. Nicely done
Debby

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Love that poem. Powerful.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Agreed, very powerful words...if only we could remember how to speak them so clearly and succintly when situations that require them arise. Wonderful write. I am with you all the way on this one. Great work!!! Thank you for sharing. Perfectly said.
Light,
Siddartha

[Badmac (Brenda )]

Powerful.
tell the how you feel
it feels good to let our feelings out sometimes.
great write
Brenda

[desertraven]

Angry writing is so powerful and liberating, I find. And You?
The need to vent hands you a blank canvas...to do with what you will.
Go Girl! ♥
Sandra :)

[Norma J. Jessee]

Powerful and expressive. Tell him like it is. You go girl.
Loved it.

[Yvonne Heidt]

What a snappy rant. I loved it. I believe I've been with someone exactly the same! I loved this stanza

"Don't say you'll make it up to me.
you damn well don't
know how."

Well said and presented.

[Valentine]

This is very expressive and a real great way of getting that out and said...too many people try to run all over someone else. play around on the side but have someone still waiting on the side lines.. I wish they all had your write to send to them..Loved it..GOD BLESS VALENTINE

[Angela Talbert]

Damn. Powerful angry word. Sound like some of my more recent ones. Good job getting it out.