Dont Say Anything!

Dont say you're sorry again.
Those words have lost all
Meaning now

Don't say you'll make it up to me.
you damn well don't
know how.

Don't say you wish I was there.
Because I know it's simply
Not true

Save your breath Mister!
and all your poems, prayers and promises too
for your someone new,who will
Listen to you.

Your new lover, who hangs on to
your every word~Because after all you just
Want to be heard.

Don't say you were wrong
I ignore those B.S. lines you sling!
You Know?
Better yet, Don't say anything!

Reviews

[Pakino]

Like how you used "Don't say". The unnatural break like Adrian K. Smith mentioned is a bit odd. But overall its koo.

[Adrian K. Smith]

I dig overall what is being said, but I found that the particular layout caused a certain unnatural break to the flow of what is being said. Then again, I am one of those pesky fellows that has always found more meaning in what is being said than in the way it is being said.

[*Kantola*]

I can really relate to this. I've felt this way before, but only for an hour cuz she eventually said that she was sorry for the trouble she gave me, and didnt do what I had thought she did... Fantastic poem. It emits alot of emotions!

[Lyra H]

I love this! Good job!

[L.G. Knight]

Another one I really like! great job!

~Frances~

[RareRed]

Great write........there's power in the bluntness of the words. These are the words that we always wish we would have found at the beginning of the heartbreak. Makes you want to cheer her on and encourage her to not ever put up the BS again! Very empowering.

[PoemRodent]

Well written and deep with emotions. I loved your thought and bluntness very nicely presented...

Love and Thoughts,

Dostani

[Fran Marie]

THanks for reading

[Carole]

Wow, glad you got that out. I heard every bit of it loud and clear and to be honest, I am sitting here cheering you on with a Yeah! You go girl! Take that! Do you hear me! Did you hear her? Sometimes writing is the best thing we can do to vent besides exercise...beating a pillow....yelling into a pillow....You sound like a woman
that has had enough and has this guys number. You've heard it all and made up your mind you aren't going to take it anymore. Kudos!

[Carrie Montgomery]

yeah...shut up, mister!! HAH, in his lying face and he can shove it where the sun don't shine! My ex-liar still tries his BS on me and I have been married for 2 yrs and w/o HIM for TEN!! huh those lying a*s men! LOL- just venting right along with ya sister! well done, nicely said.