Mandolin's Melody

I'll play thee a sonnet with mandolin

    softly massage your brow of sad sorrow

absorb anguish so that joy may begin

 bringing bright new light into each 'morrow

 

I'll sing thee mandolin's melody

  sweetest songs of love, each note to behold

chasing gray clouds away, too far to see

 kiss thy lips warm, when winter's breath breathes cold

O' hear my love song enchanting this day

  with poetry's whispered words to thy ear

 of summer's breeze and lavender's bouquet

sunshine and laughter our hearts may endear

          I'll play thee a sonnet meant for just you

                         mandolin's melody with love so true

    

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love the word crafting in the first line, introducing your well-crafted sonnet as a musical creation (which it very much is) . . . you're SHOWING as well as TELLING this combo idea between writing & making music. I appreciate that your gently elevated language is still clear & easy to follow, not using convoluted language like some sonnets do. Good word choices add much imagery thru-out.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much for the lovely comments on my poetry..i so appreciate..😀

[Greyson Bergantino]

The way it flows makes everything smooth and relaxed. I enjoyed reading this sonnet because it made me feel at ease. My favorite thing about this writing is how things are described and you can feel and hear the melody within the lines.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Halie;for the kind words and thoughts
on m y mandolin sonnet.. ever so appreciated

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is so beautiful I love it and the artwork as well

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Julia so very much ..I so appreciate it

[kentuck14]

Fran,
Beautiful piece . . . sound like it was composed in Paris, France rather than KY.
Tom

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tom..so vey much appreciate your kind words

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran Marie... a sweet endearing sonnet...
to sing away the troubles of the day...
and bring solace to your lovers soul...
gently rendered. Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pat for reading and your kind review on my sonnet..much appreciated dear friend

[Tate Morgan]

Fran i never knew you were so talented at rhythm and rhyme so glad i stopped by. Im going to save this from you in my library

[Fran Marie]

Hi Tate .so glad you stopped by
to read ..thanks so vey much for
reviewing my sonnet and the save..I so appreciate
your comments dear friend..☺

[Tate Morgan]

You are welcome

[Re-Pete]

so beautiful. your words could melt even the hardest heart. writing that sings to the soul. bravo ... :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Pete so vey much appreciate your kind words on my poetry..

[Sawdust]

truly loved your poem.
a genius piece of literature.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Shadow..ever so much appreciated...

[Lavi]

This is beautiful, I can just imagine the speaker/player of the mandolin playing gracefully to its music. I love this.

[Dinesh Kumar]

Well written
Beautiful.......