`a moment when...

lace and leather

finally come together

          frayed edges

          busted seams

don't seem to matter

as they brushed against each other

my black stockings

your black chaps

            share a chair

             tempting kisses

 rushed the night..blushing

bare ..I reached to turn the

little lamp light out

touching your skin

            seems so right

            it's a moment when..

we make love, sweet love.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'.. touching your skin ~ seems so right .. '

My goodness! You truly do know how to create a scene so alive, so visual, the toes curl! You've always laid your words frugally, naturally and warmly. This is no exception.. tis warm .. inviting .. and great!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks emmajoy so vey much appreciTe your comments on my poetry..😀

[Mustafa]

a great romantic simple poem, well said , well written,bravo Fran:))

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so vey much .. i appreciate it😀

[Novel Minded_75]

The first stanza was great in creating the heat of passion between the two lovers, and it was this, that kept me going until the end.
Visualization in any work is essential, and what I look for above all things. If I can immediately see what I am reading, I am very pleased.
Good job, Fran :)
My scores are just a rating, and not meant as any means of dishonoring your work. Just being honest: Again, not a poet :P

[Fran Marie]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poetry.. i so appreciate it..😀

[Novel Minded_75]

You're welcome, Fran :)

[An owl on the moon]

The imagery you create flows with both a tenderness and a deep wanting, shattering the rest of the world in this sweet moment. Beautifully voiced with a soft night music in the rhythm.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Craig..so much for the nice comments on my poetry..hopefully everyone can enjoy those sweet moments

[alf]

Hi Fran. I love the analogy of lace and leather having frayed edges and busted seams. Makes no difference, where love is, loving will be. This is such a delicious moment and your passion comes through the words you have chosen, alf

[Fran Marie]

Thanks; Alf, for stopping by to read and review, I so appreciate it;

[Matching Socks]

What beautiful moment of two lovers coming together, captured so perfectly.

[Fran Marie]

Thx Ana, so very much,

[Tina Kline]

Nice poem! Very well written. Tender, romantic and a bit erotic. Perfect romantic poem!
I enjoyed reading this very much.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Tina, so vey much;

[Tina Kline]

You fare welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

tender, erotic, yet subtle.......

[Fran Marie]

thanks Jacob, so very much;

[Lauriegirl]

This is a stunning piece of poetry..so fresh yet clever

[Fran Marie]

thanks lauriegirl, so very much;