The Darkside of Love

 

 

 

 

The beat of a broken heart
is stopped,with no blood left to flow
Tears no longer slide from eyes that cried,
with no hurt left to show

It's a slippery slide into
The Darkside.
A termination of love inside


An ending to all my emotions
'Tis no valid value of love,for me to feel,
Erased, is my ability to love
Cupid's poison-dipped arrow,slid in to kill.

Causing a slippery slide into
The Darkside.
A discrimination of love's pride.


Shielded is my useless heart
Blockaded is my empty mind
Both of which have slipped apart
within a matter of fleeting time.

Making a slippery slide into
The Darkside.
A reservation for love to hide.

Due to empty promises and words
A heartache will be no more
An end to problems,that made love absurd
My heart deleted all aspects which made it sore.

Just a slippery slide into
The Darkside
A destination where only a broken love can abide.
 
 
 
 

 

Reviews

[chloe cruz]

This was amazingly well-written, and I could relate to it so well, it took my breath away. Thank you for entering this into The Heart's Demise... and congratulations on a winning poem. Hehe.

"Just a slippery slide into
The Darkside
A destination where only a broken love can abide."

The ending was fantastic, and my favorite verse... most beautiful, heart-felt, etcetra.

Chloe.

[Adela Muresan]

Hmmm...I think that you should have described the emptiness caused by a sea of torment, in a less ''direct'' manor, but the flow is good and the poem is beautiful.

A.M.

[Bear]

if only the heart would cease to care for those we once did all things with in love!! If only; but, the dark side I prefer not to dwell within since the day to day can be dark enough at times.

Wow!! This is a fine and expressive write!! ;~)
Thanks for sharing your inner self!
Sallie Bear

[Catastrophe]

how i truly love the way you have written this piece; my
heart aches in pain because i feel some what the same as the words on that white
space. The first stanza made me want to carry on reading, because i thought it sounded so
beautiful yet so sad at the same time; it was my heart that felt the sadness, my eyes saw the beauty

[Angel Bird]

A breathtaking and stunning piece. So many I think can relate to those hurtful and bad feelings, when one's world stops turning and crumbles into pieces...

Excellent write. Everything in it is just perfectly done! I love it! Kudos!

[Mr. Lopez]

A lonely feeling was left in me after reading how quieted you heartbeats have become. Heartbreak always makes for a good poem but it's the writer that makes this on Great ! Excellent work. excellent !

[Dani California]

Truly incredible writing... wow!!!
Again.... Wow!

I have so many things I want to say to this, but instead... I think I'll ponder it for a few.
You certainly have a gift Fran, for capturing raw emotion and gently laying it out for your reader to explore.

Brilliant.

[Lyra H]

Nicely done!

[Prose-full]

this is amaaaazing.......

[George Love]

Love the font. It helps make the poem work in the old world style. Great read! Love it!

[SM Davis]

OH FRAN!! THANK YOU!! I knew you would come through. this is fantastic!!! some of the youngsters can learn a thing or two from this one! LOVE THE FONT! Perfect...as always.