Some Kind of Magic~

it isn't tomorrow
                yet
lets make tonight
some kind of perfection
connection uniquely formed
in all direction
          one we won't soon
                forget

where lips meet drenched in
                deep
desire saturated with sips of
of sweet scented wine
some kind of special flavor
we'll savor
             sweet kisses
                 steeped

and if a stubborn moon refuses to
                     glow
lets conjure up a dream light all our own
a wand of distant stars on a indigo stage
some kind of magic plays
an old love song
                     we both
                       know

the words to as we dance to
                   paradise
secluded for two..
inhaling love's deep breath
some kind of passion speaks
in soothing tones of
                       you and
                           I~
                        

                     
                  

 
 

Reviews

[KeeD]

This was beautiful.. It reminds me of a dance a sailor has with a lady at some port side bar far away from home.. only to hold onto that memory for forever and a day. I feel so much love and warmth in these words, you cradle each sentence with feeling, I can picture my surroundings change to suit the ambiance of this poem. It is some kind of magic~ the way your words have a longing effect on me.

[Butch Decatoria]

Some kinda great writing here, good stuff. Kudos.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so very much;

[AprilRN1210]

I had to come check out your work, since you left such a lovely review on mine, and I have to say, this is exquisite.. I am so glad I did.. This is enchanting and sensual, it captivates the reader and the flow has you falling deeper and deeper into this seductive spell.. wheeew.. I really enjoyed this.. The passion, the imagery, the teasing makes for a delicious write indeed.. well done!!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks April, for such a great review...wish I was better at reviewing ...but I am working on it..

[AprilRN1210]

I just write what I feel, that's about all you can do ma'am... no review is a bad review:)
it was my pleasure!

[Frieda P]

Stirring, I love the deep indigo feel of this one....inhaled the sultry sweetness of your words.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Frieda ,so very much;

[Frieda P]

Pleasure was indeed mine....

[Bright Ocean Star]

Nice write, Fran Marie. I like the rhythm and the rhyme in this one. You did an excellent job of setting the scene and putting us all in the heat of the moment. Very nice.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Star, so much for reading.. much appreciated;

[ANM]

It's a kind of magic by Queen... Sums this up magical prose!

[Fran Marie]

ah. yes, Freddie / Queen.. from the 80's that song...thanks ANM; so very much,

[ANM]

Your welcome

[Norah]

I love this poem, very passionate and sensational :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks Norah, so very much;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is really a nice, passionate love poem and reminds me of two songs...one by ELO..."Strange Magic"

and the other by Bob Seeger..."We've got Tonite"--

"who needs to tomorrow, let's make it last, let's find a way"

i was looking for a way to extend your frisky poem...nice stuff.

[Fran Marie]

I love Bob Seeger songs,thanks Jacob; so very much;