Some Kind of Magic~

it isn't tomorrow
                yet
lets make tonight
some kind of perfection
connection uniquely formed
in all direction
          one we won't soon
                forget

where lips meet drenched in
                deep
desire saturated with sips of
of sweet scented wine
some kind of special flavor
we'll savor
             sweet kisses
                 steeped

and if a stubborn moon refuses to
                     glow
lets conjure up a dream light all our own
a wand of distant stars on a indigo stage
some kind of magic plays
an old love song
                     we both
                       know

the words to as we dance to
                   paradise
secluded for two..
inhaling love's deep breath
some kind of passion speaks
in soothing tones of
                       you and
                           I~
                        

                     
                  

 
 

Reviews

[KeeD]

This was beautiful.. It reminds me of a dance a sailor has with a lady at some port side bar far away from home.. only to hold onto that memory for forever and a day. I feel so much love and warmth in these words, you cradle each sentence with feeling, I can picture my surroundings change to suit the ambiance of this poem. It is some kind of magic~ the way your words have a longing effect on me.

[emmajoy]

'..a wand of distant stars on a indigo stage ~ some kind of magic plays ~ an old love song ~ we both ~
know .. '

If this had been written on paper, you'd have ignited it to kingdom come!

Your words are magnificently romantic - and more. But not at all exaggerated; passion private, briefly shared. In fact, your work is this side of discretion by way of a fine choice of words and punctuation. One's imagination is fired however!

[Fran Marie]

Awhh.. thanks emmajoy. I so appreciated your kind comments on this piece.. I do write my poems on paper before putting them oline.... but no flames have ignited...yet... lol.. thanks again dear friend..

[emmajoy]

No flames ignited yet? Oh dear, okay... am on my way with more kindle! Please find some bonny smiles, my friend. :)

[GPR]

Such a beautiful poem :D It was very well written and passionate!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, GPR, so much appreciated..

[GPR]

You're welcome :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

Very measured words on an immeasurable subject Beautifully written.

[613]

This poem was structured very well; both written language & formatting. I truly enjoyed this. Nice work!

- Brittney

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much, Brittney, I appreciate it..

[613]

Sure thing!

[Adam Adams]

Very sensual write to me. The words're nicely immersed with your poetry. Liked the mixture of romance, love & sensuality that you've beautifully & romantically blended into the power of love-words. Beautiful work. Enjoyed it!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Adams, so glad you enjoyed;

[alf]

Hi Fran. love that underlying passion that oozes in measured drops from your pen and sprinkles a new kind of magic on your words. Beautiful, sensuous and so loving, with thought that reflect the intimacy of the moment, just love it!!! My hat off to you with this write, alf

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Alf, glad you liked it, much appriciated..

[Confuser]

Fran: You really lay it all out there - perfectly slowly sensual but to the point. You are so talented! The character of seductress is written so well. Love it; whatever it is (Mystic or Magic) you've got it! Thank you so very much! Dale

[Fran Marie]

Thanks So much, Dale, much appriciated..glad you enjoyed..

[Confuser]

You're welcome; love your poems.

[ksscampos]

Well deserved first place in the contest... I really liked this

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much for reading;

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. Nice photo and words took to good places and thoughts.
"and if a stubborn moon refuses to
glow
lets conjure up a dream light all our own
a wand of distant stars on a indigo stage
some kind of magic plays
an old love song
we both
know"
Always good to know your place and the ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thanks John,so very much Appriciated,