Sweet Rhythm
A Poem by Fran Marie
senryu
each beat of my heart
matches the heat of your dance
swaying sweet rhythm
© 2014 Fran Marie
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The harmony and engagement of two hearts can't be denied.
Great little poem, Fran. :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thanks Tim for
the kind review..
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Beautiful artwork and amazing words dear Fran. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thank you John
I so appreciate the kind review
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2 Years Ago
You are welcome dear Fran.
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Splendid, short, and most definitely sweet
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks Carla.. So much appreciated
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Danced beautifully: great graphic, great metre, great meaning equals a very fine senryu!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks , Emmajoy, much appreciate your very fine review..
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Very nice indeed Fran! Much enjoyed.
Helena :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks, Helena, so vey much
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Love this write, can feel the rhythm in the words!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
many thanks James, glad you enjoyed
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an intimate moment held within and without, nice.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks,Mauricio,...vey much appreciated;
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Wooo I love this wicked dance Senryu....!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thanks Frieda; so much
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Ohlala Fran, a scorching little poem you have here.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thanks Dale, so much;
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Added on August 1, 2014
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