Sweet Rhythm

senryu

each beat of my heart

      matches the heat of your dance

                              swaying sweet rhythm

Reviews

[Relic]

The harmony and engagement of two hearts can't be denied.

Great little poem, Fran. :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tim for
the kind review..

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing words dear Fran. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Thank you John
I so appreciate the kind review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.

[Carla]

Splendid, short, and most definitely sweet

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Carla.. So much appreciated

[emmajoy]

Danced beautifully: great graphic, great metre, great meaning equals a very fine senryu!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks , Emmajoy, much appreciate your very fine review..

[Helen Crutchett]

Very nice indeed Fran! Much enjoyed.

Helena :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Helena, so vey much

[Jamestown]

Love this write, can feel the rhythm in the words!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Fran Marie]

many thanks James, glad you enjoyed

[Mauricio Montoya]

an intimate moment held within and without, nice.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks,Mauricio,...vey much appreciated;

[Frieda P]

Wooo I love this wicked dance Senryu....!

[Fran Marie]

thanks Frieda; so much

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ohlala Fran, a scorching little poem you have here.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Dale, so much;