If He had..

If He had..

A Poem by Fran Marie

If Jesus had tattoos
our names and sins
etched upon his skin
would we love him just the same
 or crucify
 him once again


instead of loving one another
would we still judge our brother

 for his skin so dark or fair
 or for the clothes he wears

the addict for his deadly vice
the homeless for their hellish life


 if Jesus wore tattoos
 wouldn't he still be the same man
 inside

 showing his perfect and timeless love
 
 

© 2014 Fran Marie


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I love how you expose how judgmental everyone is in this poem...Using Jesus and him having tattoos was a genius way of portraying how superficial appearance is and how it does not really mean anything if you have a beautiful soul. This is a great poem and the message is a powerful one that I can appreciate very much. Great Write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jessica, so very much appreciated;



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I imagine all would happen the same way. He will have scars to show us in Heaven. His nail scarred hands. As for the tattoos, I hate to see a body completely covering what God has made. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

thanks valentine, for reading and reviewing that's what I love about reviews everyone's POV..i like .. read more
i don't think we learn very well...i think we would crucify him and each other all over again and again and again.

really thoughtful write.

judgement is one of the worst characteristics we have.

Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

I think so too....thanks so very much, Jacob;
Thank you for sharing this.


this was different I really liked this
nice flow and nicely written thank you
for your lovely review and comments you
left on my page and for this wonderful write.


if Jesus wore tattoos
wouldn't he still be the same man
inside

showing his perfect and timeless love



I don't Believe in wearing tattoos but I
do love how you Crafted this poem here.


Blessings. kindred poet


Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

thanks so very much, Benita;
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

It's a pleasure my friend. you're quite welcome. blessings. kindred poet
Really great write FM.
Great message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

thanks Ance so vey much;
I love how you expose how judgmental everyone is in this poem...Using Jesus and him having tattoos was a genius way of portraying how superficial appearance is and how it does not really mean anything if you have a beautiful soul. This is a great poem and the message is a powerful one that I can appreciate very much. Great Write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jessica, so very much appreciated;

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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