`Romance and Roses`~Sonnet

` Romance and Roses`

                          

Romance and roses speak a love so sweet
A love which fills mine heart elegantly
and as I'm drawn into thy body heat
willing victim  to your charm completely
Besieged by desires, I taste thy lips
Is it angel, demon? which drives this force?
tracing softly thy face with fingertips
woulds't thou love wish for me to take new course?
The radient glow of moon's magic light
O,Behold!~ silver night stars dance love's song
'Tis a love which fills my heart~ merry blithe
and doth render my soul, to thee belong

Yes,'Tis a Love which fills my happy heart
And Romance and Roses but play their part

 

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Besieged by desires, I taste your lips ~ I love the power you gave this emotional outpouring and the way this maiden portrays her true love for this knight in the line
~ Tis a love which fills my happy heart
And Romance and Roses but play their part ~

This is beautifully penned, good luck and keep em' coming

[Brianna Brie]

'Tis love as delicate as lace. Your words bloom as spring with vibrancy and life. Feels very old world. Beautiful picture. Applauding!

[Jacqueline Lopez]

Are you sure Shakespeare didn't write this poem? It's awesome and beautifully written? Love it!!!

[Just Plain Me]

I really like this poem...good job :)

[Anima Inspired]

Tranquil...dreamy...enticing...this has all of the elements of a truly great love sonnet. The last two lines are absolutely fabulous...they can be used as a metaphor for so many things. Beautiful!

[Suelou]

Fran, you do these so well. You must be the queen of sonnets.

[Erotic Goddess]

Besieged by desires, I taste your lips
Is it angel, demon?,which drives this force?
tracing softly your face with fingertips

This is so pretty, with beautiful language and put into a frame, old and perfected by masters far beyond our day. This was wonderful.

~Stephanie

[A. L. Robinson]

Wow! With such beautiful lines as those, what is there left to say.

Sonnets definitely are your gift!

Great Write!

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is nicely done and although I was looking for a more classic ryhme scheme. This is a beatiful piece and well written. With great images.
Debby