I'll be There

Life's road we travel, regardless the length
for any weakness Dear,I'll be your strength
 
A Bridge over troubled waters for you
'Tis what my Love for you, is meant to do
And when steep waters gather darkness deep
and kiss with icy breath your soul at sleep
I'll absorb the chill each dark shadow casts
You'll dream no more the dream of terrors past
Release your fears to a hungry night's wind
to devour death's shadows from within
Awake refreshed, kissed by the dew of dawn
At twilight, when day's done, we'll sing our song
 
For any darkness,~ I will be your light
Any road we're on, regardless the plight
 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

Oh Fran dear you have a heart of gold,No one who tells all those beauties is but all hearts
As we travel on,no matter how long..for any weakness dear I ll be your strength
Bridge over troubled waters I am for you,Its my love,its what meant to do
And when waters are so dark and deep,A kiss with icy breath puts your soul at sleep
I ll absorb all your fears,you ll dream no more the dreams of past
Release your fears into me,for all your darkness I ll be your light
God what loveliness ,this is so great ,just carried away with the too much emotions
How I loved your writes
lovely write..

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'I'll be There'
Fran Marie,
This was well done.
It expresses the opportunity of giving one self for the good of another.
In the true hard times is when this is tested. Words to remember:
'An when steep waters gather darkness deep
and kiss with icy breath your soul at sleep
I'l absorb the chill each dark shadow casts'
Beautifully written.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Kathy . ever so much for reading and reviewing..I appreciate it..

[Nish Nish the Fish]

You've a way with words Fran, your metaphors are astounding and your flow is simply on a professional level. Truly beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for entering :)

[forfila]

This is WONDERFUL Fran. I love your spiritual devotion, you word your meaning so clearly and each line rolls of the tongue sweetly.

Lovely, Fran

:)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Another beautiful piece from your well penned hand.

[An Open Venue]

This is a beautiful, well crafted sonnet; and a tribute to gift of love.

"And when steep waters gather darkness deep
and kiss with icy breath your soul at sleep
I'll absorb the chill each dark shadow casts
You'll dream no more the dream of terrors past"

These are not the words of idle love fleeting;
they are the promise to one
from another who understands.

exceptional

Ven

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

truly magnificent, such divine words of love...

wake refreshed, kissed by the dew of dawn
At twilight, when day's done, we'll sing our song

really love these two lines.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"Life's road we travel, regardless the length
for any weakness Dear,I'll be your strength"

Oh! Such a beautiful start..
I actually loved this one..
Amazing flow and awesome feel..
Great write!

[Just Manoosh]

This sings from the heart, so much love and clarity. A wonderful piece with a lucky recipient. I also love the unique structure to this piece, its is almost topped and tailed. Mx

[James K. Blaylock]

Another wonderful piece. I really must say, I greatly enjoy reading your work.You got my vote.