To me, it reminds me of a thought I have very frequently. The idea that humans see themselves from birth to death. Opposed to understanding that the soul itself lives before our birth and after our death. The idea that the universe is unknown, and our soul is the only thing we will ever have the most knowledge about, over any book, idea, person, etc... Almost makes one wonder, why isn't the soul studied? Humans study everything else, except the soul?
Beautifully written. The whole time I had feelings of a dark space, but not evil. More of the dark, secure kind of place. Very dreamlike. The ending was beautiful, and I love the idea of crystal skies. Great imagery there. Good job! :D
There is a spiritual elegance to this one. "beyond time's boundry line" We all wonder what will lie beyond the ultimate boundary. Intense poetry - very well written. Lydia