Romantic Dreams

Welcome to my world of romantic dreams
where you're the star upon my silver screen
from fantasy's palette of
fanciful designs and schemes

Welcome to my warm amber embrace
let me love you with mind and soul
take any amount of given space
this shameless heart,in slumber, has no control

Welcome to my foolish pride
non-existant when it comes to you
in bold advances,i throw it aside
in shades of midnight blue

Welcome to my boudoir fair
in tones of scarlet, crimsons and red
the heat of my emotions,is seated there
Execute! these romantic dreams inside my head

 

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

It welcomes you with a certain smattering of class and movie-size sensation. They are not the words of any woman, but rather the words of the lady of the house.

[Mark D. Chevalier]

Congratulations on the honorable mention for this poem, you deserve it Fran!
It has a nice even flow, and drips with seduction.
M

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

This drips of honesty. Superb

Dave

[Marie]

Great job, Fran.

[Fran Marie]

THanks

[None]

This is not only romantic but very touching as well from beginning to end. If men couild only see what really goes on inside our heads! haha. This paints an extravagant scene.

[Emily]

Great poem. It's a very different idea than a lot of the love / seduction poems I've read. "Welcome to my world / of romantic dreams / where you're the star." Great opening lines. Really good job!

Thanks for entering this in The Art of Seduction!

[Roberta Weth]

Thank you taking the time to enter in my contest I came here to wish you luck and say that this is a lovely poem.
~Bobbi

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW, this is wonderful! A romantic sonnet that throws honest emotions on the table. Lydia