Romantic Dreams

Welcome to my world of romantic dreams
where you're the star upon my silver screen
from fantasy's palette of
fanciful designs and schemes

Welcome to my warm amber embrace
let me love you with mind and soul
take any amount of given space
this shameless heart,in slumber, has no control

Welcome to my foolish pride
non-existant when it comes to you
in bold advances,i throw it aside
in shades of midnight blue

Welcome to my boudoir fair
in tones of scarlet, crimsons and red
the heat of my emotions,is seated there
Execute! these romantic dreams inside my head

 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Romantic Dreams"
Fran Marie,
inner vision remains a reality
whether it is obvious to others
or not. It felt like that within
your lines. I even wondered if
this was your life within sleeping
hours free to pursue your loved
one and vice-versa. Anyway to give
one's heart is always a vulnerable thing.
There are no guarantees that the desire
will be returned as we wish or dream:
"Welcome to my foolish pride
non-existent when it comes to you
in bold advances, I throw it aside
in shades of midnight blue"
Blessings to you.
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Kathy so very much for reviewing my poetry..

[ANTO]

love the sensual build up and fine-lingeried ryhming Fran Marie. I loved Execute! - the pinnacle of the tension and a huge release at the end. Brilliant!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Anto, so glad you enjoyed;

[Brianna Brie]

Nice combination of words. Lovely read!

[Chris]

I see a waltzing couple... moving round and around a ballroom floor.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Lovely romantic, heartfelt and loved every word!

[Sasavet]

This is very beautiful, but at the same time a bit desperate in a very subtle way I found.


"Execute! these romantic dreams inside my head."

As amazing as the dreams are, you would rather not have them than not have her in real life. Love it :)

[la_laland29]

that was REALLY! good, i loved it

[With Each Raindrop Come..]

Passion, Romance, It's all very well portrayed in this poem, I love it! and I think ive got a finalist!

[Tara Jean Olson]

I love how you convey the feelings with a passionate, and clear expression. this poem is incredible!

[Sean M. Addams]

very touching piece love the imagery and the romantic tones in this piece ... flow is good too.....overall nice job on this one!!!