`not since summer`

~Sonnet~


Not since summer have i felt such sweet bliss
spellbound and succumbed by a new love's kiss
not since summer have i announced in verse
this endless desire ready to burst
A new plane of enlightment lies within
uncovers doubt, with a sense of command
Not since summer's red rose faded away
have i been given, life's new sweet bouquet
not since summer's soft breeze fluttered on by
have i not wept tears,whence ,eyes were not dry
oh, yes, sadder moments, i have known
solitary nights of crying alone

Not since summer hath my heart sung new tune
unchained beneath September's autumn moon

Reviews

[Neville]

Beauty threads its way woven in words from one end to the very other..

a delight to read and contemplate this fine mane.......... N

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Neville..for reveing my poetry..much appreciated

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely .. Neville

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"not since summer"
Fran Marie,
New hope is the thread glistening through this poem.
"not since summer have I announced in verse'
this endless desire ready to burst
a new plane of enlightment lies within"
This next line is where I see something strong come into play with the old conditioning replaced with new light.
"uncovers doubt, with a sense of command"
It's good to see the tears diminish.
Beautiful ending:
"Not since summer hath my heart sung new tune
unchained beneath September's autumn moon"

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much for your kind words .i so appreciate ..

[Kathy Van Kurin]

You are welcome and I hope joy is your continued gift within life and writing.
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

awhh thanks Kathy//i wish you the same

[Valentine]

A sweet and lovely write. I really like the flow of these lines. Valentine

[Fran Marie]

Thank you, so much appriciated

[Chris]

Tastes of new beginnings...

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Love this one. The last line is a real closer.

Dave

[Amor-de-angel]

Beautiful. Love the last line. great write

[A. L. Robinson]

Lovely piece indeed! I love the closing line, "unchained beneath September's autumn moon"


Great write!

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!