If October Was A Woman

If October Was A Woman

A Poem by FractalLuna

If October was a woman,
I would kiss her autumnal lips.
If October was a woman,
I would hold her bountiful hips.
If October was a woman,
I would thread her golden hair.
If October was a woman,
I would succumb to her heated stare.
If October was a woman,
She would wear a warm-hued dress,
And the wind would be her caress.
She would unveil the underworld spirit,
To make you aware, but not to fear it,
And she would make you Fall in love,
If October was a woman.  

© 2016 FractalLuna


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Gee
Awww, what a delightful read. If October was a woman she would be fine for 2 weeks then morph into the nutty premenstrual, menstrual and post menstrual loony, that would have any man walking on eggshells and thinking, "Jesus, what planet is she from, cos it definitively ain't Venus "

Posted 8 Years Ago


FractalLuna

8 Years Ago

Your abnormal reviews are effective!
Congratulations on 23 years!
Gee

8 Years Ago

Cheers, hopefully, God willing, well, that's if there actually is a God, I'd imagine if there was on.. read more
FractalLuna

8 Years Ago

Well, I believe in the power of energy and think humans set their own intentions, so I say no worrie.. read more
Beautifully creative words and flow. Could almost hear strings slowly play along to your words, lifting them higher and floating back down so softly. Beautiful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FractalLuna

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. It was fun to write. A lovely crescendo to welcome the season!

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