My sorrow

What am I really here for? 

        The names? The lies? 

Im not here to help...thats for sure... 

      Im losing my ablilty...to stay awake

 from the cold dream known as reality 

          My eyes are open but slowly closing..... 

 Whats wrong with me? Why cant I escape

 My personality....beginning to fade 

                I have friends....but Im starting to feel...different 

          Unhappy.....not complete.....
					

				

Reviews

[Olivia]

I put them there to help the mood along. Like as dramatic pauses.

[Lexy]

Hey, I like this, my only thing are the ellipsies or whatever they call the "...". Why are they there?