One Bittersweet Kiss

~ * One Bittersweet Kiss ~ *

(Dedicated to  my friend Tiffany Bigger)

 

My feet seemed to grace-

As light as skates glide,

Over this dainty shore,

Casting their own lines through,

This bittersweet image.

 

It speaks its own insignia,

As my heart begins to,

Thump with zealous life-

Before I begin to fly,

Across the glorified context,

Where an explosive snow of secrets waken,

To gather at the snow banks where,

My secrets seem to lie in mounds,

Which fill this prism-need.

 

And my-

Lust explodes within my chest while I tremble-

As an inner sparkle,

Dotting the grounds meets,

A translucent glow,

Of a glinting new imagery,

As I watch the bedroom mirror,

And you lean in to kiss me . . .

Knowing that it’s our last for all eternity ~ *

Author's Note

Can anyone tell me how to insert music within the piece? I'd like to imbed a clip that will play automatically at the open. Thanks!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A couple of areas need a bit polishing...but the verse is a dedication piece...so with that seems you wrote this as is...when the words came to memory...I would refine these lines:

My feet seemed to grace-
As light as skates glide,
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My feet seemed to grace-
Glide as light as skates,

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To gather at the snow banks where,
My secrets seem to lie in mounds,
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To gather at the snow banks,
Where my secrets seem to lie in mounds,

besides that I see no other areas...if I missed one...then so be...this is just IMPO...

[Foxemerald]

Thank you once again for your review. I do appreciate the perceptions you seem to hone when reading my work. Due to your labors, I will be more than happy to take your ideas into consideration. I am gratified by your support, and hope you will drop in again ~

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...