Multiverse Theory

A finite number of particles,

swirling within an infinite universe,

creating planets, patterns, bodies,

colliding together to form you and I.

Somewhere far through starlight,

we exist in parallel form,

Our alternate bodies dwelling far outside of our reach,

Somewhere in the deep abyss,

We live multiple lives,

Our particles humming and buzzing,

Our hearts beating,

If we ever travel the light years away to our twins,

We could see how our lives are different,

And be who we always wanted to be,

But alas,

We sit here,

In our world, our galaxy,

Destroying our home, and fighting our brothers,

Leaving the great unknown a mystery,

Like a book with the final pages torn out.

Reviews

[Relic]

You've created an interesting poem that explores the possibilities of an alternate universe in a way that is totally understandable. It really does make you wonder our other selves are more content and happy. I'll bet they are.

One suggestion:
Our alternate bodies dwell far outside of our reach,

Nice writing.

[angel]

I'll bet I've done a whole lot more living than any other version of myself. If any of the rest of 'em are even alive. They might not be.
I almost died again and again...and again!
Yet here I still am.
I wonder if they wonder about me...if they DO exist.
I just wondered about them, after all, for a moment.