The Confession

Well I know it’s my fault, that we’re apart,

the truth is baby, you still own my heart,

Each night worsens, as I stay up alone,

all I think about is you, and this heart without a home,

How can I show you, prove to you I’ve changed?

I’m done hiding now, I admit that I’m to blame,

If only you could know, exactly how I feel,

cause baby after you, I know that love is real,

Do you remember, the summer at the lake?

We had a world of trust, but now you think I’m fake,

I’ve got something, that I need you to know,

baby I’ve tried so hard, but I just can’t let go,

How can I show you, prove to you I’ve changed?

I’m done hiding now, I admit that I’m to blame,

If only you could know, exactly how I feel,

cause baby after you, I know that love is real,

Tears run down my face, while I’m alone in the dark,

I can’t help but wonder, who’s head’s against your heart,

I've messed up, but I’ve paid for my mistakes,

The pain of love seems so much worse, when a broken hearts at stake,

How can I show you, prove to you I’ve changed?

I’m done hiding now, I admit that I’m to blame,

If only you could know, exactly how I feel,

cause baby after you, I know that love is real,

All I can do is pray you’ll be alright,

And ask the man upstairs to bring you home tonight,

I’ve been told many things, like love’s a losing game,

But babe you’re the only one, where the love is worth the pain.

Author's Note

This is a poem/song. If anyone has any positive feedback or constructive criticism I would greatly appreciate it. Thank-you :)

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

It's good, and before you read the Author's Note, you kind of sing the words in your head. I have one suggestion for you, maybe change "but I’ve paid for my mistakes" to but I've paid my dues.

[Sarah Morgan]

Before even reading your Authors note.. I was kind of singing this in my head. I'm like this could be a really good rap. Hopefully, that's not an offense to you, but I had a little beat going on in my head thinking I could buy this on Itunes :) I write a lot of lyrics - a lot! You are good with your emotions and how you feel.. very good piece. 100