Crushed Lavender

The auroma of lavender,

Your scent so sweet,

In just one breath,

I knew it was you.

 

I savored the moment,

Those lucious pair,

They came to me,

Ever so soft.

 

The shelter of my being,

Wrapped in warmth,

Carried me away,

I cherished it.

 

That soothing rhythm,

Music to my ears,

Beats my heart,

Forever and always.

 

I loved that thought,

Being held in your arms,

I've remebered you,

Though your gone.

 

 

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

That was gorgeous, but had various typos/spelling errors.

The auroma of lavender,

Your scent so sweet,

In just one breath,

I knew it was you.



I savored the momment,
[moment]
Those lucious pair,
[pair of what, i cunfuzzled]
They came to me,

Ever so soft.



They shelter of my being,
[they sheltered my being??]
Wrapped in warmth,

Carried me away,

I cherished it.



That soothing rhythem,
[rhythm]
Music to my ears,

Beats my heart,

Forever and always.



I loved that thought,

You held in my arms,
[uhm, well that is one awkward position]
I've remebered you,

Though your gone.