Fading... Gone

Every thing that you said
Killed me.
Inside.

Every dream that you crushed
Pains me.
For life.
 

Every blow you laid on me.
Engraved.
Scarred.

Every cut brings me closer.
Peace.
Sanity.

Every drop of blood spilt
Freedom.
Heaven.

Every memory you bore in me.
Fading....
Gone

Author's Note

Feel free to comment it you wish, but know that i prohibit negitiveness.

Reviews

[Claire P.]

I love it! Full of hope.

[Kristin Brecoe]

nice repetition!

[Sandra K]

Great poem!! Can't wait to read more!!!

[Shadows of Sight]

The Last Stanza summed up the truth of life. Everything eventually is gone. Perhaps one day, life won't see so much pain. I pray for that day.
Thanks for sharing these thoughts :)

[Kristin Brecoe]

its a really good poem, but theres one part where flow isnt all there:
..... So now i know what i must do.

Every cut brings me closer.
To making peace.
Sanity.


i adore it though.