Moonlight's touch

The aurora of the moon shines on my skin,
Shadowing clouds roll across the sky,
Forthcoming the darkening silence,
The cresent and my heart collide.
 

Author's Note

You may comment if you wish, but know that i prohibit negitiveness.

Reviews

[Claire P.]

wow, thats amazing as it is, but if you wrote a book like that it would be awesome

[Tymme]

Nice imagery.

Two typos- 'aurora' ( I presume, or aura?), and 'collide'.

[Sandra K]

Love the imagery

[Kristin Brecoe]

this one is fabulous. the imagery on this one is beautiful in its own way. =]

[Brenda Sue]

Very beautiful. Wonderfully penned. Great job.