Can you see my feelings?

Am I not good enough any more?

I call you showering you in my love and feelings, 

yet you push me away,

Every time,

Each time,

The loneliness sinks in further.

One day maybe it'll scar me,

One day maybe you'll return my feelings,

I feel invisible to you,

or at least you want me to be,

How am I supposed to be happy,

When my feelings are punished.

I don't want to give up,

I don't want to fight,

I don't want to complain,

I am become yet an empty shell,

Your heart won't shelter with mine,

Your soul won't embrace mine,

You've put up a wall.

I wish you would call me, 

and tell me you love me,

I wish you would text and tell me you miss me,

Yet my wishes lay empty,

Maybe I'm really alone,

and my feelings are just shielding me from the truth.

Yet......

I still love you,

I still pray for you to call,

I know one day,

this wait........

Will be worth it...

Because your special,

I hope you can see how I feel.

 

Reviews

[fernii]

Good poem! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. Regret and hope can twist our thoughts up and life. I like the emotion and the desire in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This poem is so strong and full of so much emotion. I loved it.

[dontwakeme]

Your poem is strong and beautiful...