Where are the words

Because i hurt the one closest to me

You’re the one i treasure most,

yet the words for you seem to evaporate from my mouth,

I have all these words for you,

all of love,

but the words elude my mind and causes you the pain,

 

I know the words are "I’m sorry"

But i can’t find the way to say it,

your my greatest achievement,

yet you never hear it from me,

 

Sorry is still the word you deserve,

but the words hide in the shadows now taunting me,

your hurt and i don’t know how to fix this,

 

Your love is still there though,

you'll love me forever and you don't want to let go,

you want to stay together always,

you wasn't wrong i know how you feel,

I’ve always known,

 

The word I needed to say are finally here,

The words you deserve the most,

The words I’m sorry are no longer possible,

But these tell you everything I want to say,

 

Deep down in my soul the words linger on,

And they will live on for an eternity and an eternity after that,

I'm ready to tell you the words you deserve most,

I Love You Hayley F

 

 

 

Reviews

[s y e]

Woah, this was a lovely poem. So much raw emotion.... Wow

[Purplerose]

Really beautiful and full expression and passion. :)

[Andrea Vargas]

Emotian is just amazingly powerful in this poem! great write

[fernii]

Such a great poem, very deep and powerful :)

[Casper]

Very good poem ;)
- Sarah

[Coyote Poetry]

Some words are hard to say. But are needed to be said. I like the feel of conflict and the positive ending. Hardest person to forgive. Is yourself. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[shedevil]

the are no words that can be spoken against this touching piece

[absolutefolie]

Wow, this touched me greatly. Nice job :)

[CC]

Wonderful. Just wonderful.

[Loves The Forgotten]

those two little words are the words i hate most so im glad i never hear them lol and dont worry u never have to says the words ,cause i always know there meaning .Saying ' i love you ' is only and small fragment of the way you show me you care i could go a week without hearing them and know your feelings havent changed and you should know it's appliys on this half of the yin yang as well