Angel

The poem is about a angel, whose love never left

A symbol of the light, yet i hide in the darkness,
I’m your saviour and your friend, yet you do not know me?
I’m always by your side yet you do not feel my touch,
Do you see me? Do you hear me? Why do you torture me so?

I try to protect you from harm,
yet i do not bleed,
feel no pain,
feel nothing,
Can you hear me cry? Do you even feel me here? Why do you not answer?

Your with another, and I’m still right by your side,
yet you have left mine?
I still feel the pain,
i still feel the sorrow,
Do you even care? Do you even love?

Yet i still see your smile,
your happiness,
your joy,
you have not left me,
It is I who has left you.

Author's Note

I think this poem was very amateurish but please leave comments so i can make my next better

Reviews

[Cree Nations]

Bittersweet sorrow.
Always a poets outlet.
thanks

[Ezekiel Silver]

This is a great poem!!! It kind of reminds me of my poem "The Black Winged Angel." However your's is more creative and vivid! Nice job!!!

[Andrea Vargas]

This was lovely, You captured the essence of the angels emotions and I beleive you did a really good job.

[Jazique]

Awe so sad. Sure their were a few errors with things like "Your with another" but, it was good for its the classic I give my heart to you but, you in return give me nothing but, a shadow.

[Casper]

Love the write. Very nicely done. :)
- Sarah

[Coyote Poetry]

I do believe in Angels. In my worst time. I have been saved by strangers. I do like the feel and the emotion of the poem. I like the positive ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[shedevil]

it was good but if you want to kick it up a notch describe the lenght of the pain the angel it feeling. i understood the fact that he's hurt i just dont know how deep the cut runs

[absolutefolie]

Wow, this is so lovely. Beautifully written, well done!

[Killesa Minerva desa Fl..]

This wasn't amaterush! This was remarkable! This is so amazing and sweet. This in so sweet and unbearable to say that you have an amazing talent for writing!!!!!!!

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. i like how this is written ... the last stanza is particularly great ...