OOOOOoooooh O.O I liiiiiiiiiiiike it :D lol the ending, like ain't nobody got time for that, I honestly would be like...byyyye, but no this was a good piece, it was very well written and captured my attention like yellow penguins. Awesome job dude!
That beauty of life is that we have this time to figure out who we are but sometimes it'd even a mystery to our selves. You learn something new about people, and yourself everyday. Great write, definitely a favorite
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your review, I guess everyone has that stage where they try to find there identity. I .. read moreThank you for your review, I guess everyone has that stage where they try to find there identity. I found mine not long ago and when I did I wondered why I it took long for me to finally find it
11 Years Ago
My pleasure, and sometimes you just don't see what's right in front of you, and when you do, you're .. read moreMy pleasure, and sometimes you just don't see what's right in front of you, and when you do, you're like "well how could I have missed that?" I searched for me for a while then realized I contradict myself so often it was pointless, just live is what I say
11 Years Ago
Haha yeah that's a good way to go really :) I guess having an identity of sort makes people feel mor.. read moreHaha yeah that's a good way to go really :) I guess having an identity of sort makes people feel more comforted I know I do myself
11 Years Ago
I'm the opposite I love being unpredictable and surprising myself to me it makes my life more intere.. read moreI'm the opposite I love being unpredictable and surprising myself to me it makes my life more interesting/amusing, the identity thing can wait a bit :p
11 Years Ago
Hahaha well I'm sure hanging out with you would be a big ol' laugh then =D
11 Years Ago
Haha well I do love hanging out with myself so I can attest to that ;) well there's never a dull mom.. read moreHaha well I do love hanging out with myself so I can attest to that ;) well there's never a dull moment especially with my lack of filter and possible ADD which makes me act like a five year old on a sugar high lol
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Hahaha now that is fun, oddly enough I seem quite sane until I'm with people then they kinda realise.. read moreHahaha now that is fun, oddly enough I seem quite sane until I'm with people then they kinda realise oh god he's insane :P
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That's the beauty of it, the people who know you best know your insane but choose to hang out with y.. read moreThat's the beauty of it, the people who know you best know your insane but choose to hang out with you anyways
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Haha yeah, well I haven't spent time with another person apart form my cousin for about 4 months now.. read moreHaha yeah, well I haven't spent time with another person apart form my cousin for about 4 months now ;) It gets lonely
11 Years Ago
That's a shame! Get out and be social my friend! Though we all know your not suppose to talk to stra.. read moreThat's a shame! Get out and be social my friend! Though we all know your not suppose to talk to strangers, take my word of advice, sometimes strangers are the most interesting people to talk to haha that sounds so naiive of me
11 Years Ago
Haha strangers can be fun! I've met enough in my time, the best strangers are the ones that know you.. read moreHaha strangers can be fun! I've met enough in my time, the best strangers are the ones that know you but you have no idea who they are!
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Oh that's a little sketchy don't you think? Unless you just don't remember them...I've had some fun .. read moreOh that's a little sketchy don't you think? Unless you just don't remember them...I've had some fun with strangers in my time, you know that old saying never take candy from strangers? Being the strange individual I am I once asked a stranger for their candy, they were quite confused lol
11 Years Ago
Hahaha, switching it around on them! Now that is how to play it, yeah I usually just don't remember .. read moreHahaha, switching it around on them! Now that is how to play it, yeah I usually just don't remember them, people from years ago :P
11 Years Ago
Ehh I tend to forget names but random facts and memories stay permenantly stored, my mind remembers .. read moreEhh I tend to forget names but random facts and memories stay permenantly stored, my mind remembers what it wishes to, not what I would think!! I prefer to switch things up, you gotta keep people on their toes!
11 Years Ago
Haha yeah I always remember random crap I'll never need to know, like I know the reason Radiators ar.. read moreHaha yeah I always remember random crap I'll never need to know, like I know the reason Radiators are incorrectly named :P
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Really? Do tell...my mind prefers useless info like I could name you five different roman emperors a.. read moreReally? Do tell...my mind prefers useless info like I could name you five different roman emperors and why they are famous and the chemical process plants very deep in the ocean use when there is lack of sunlight but ask me to name my crush in first grade or my third grade teacher and I draw a blank
11 Years Ago
Hahahaha :P Well a radiator is incorrectly named because it emits heat rather than radiate it. Radia.. read moreHahahaha :P Well a radiator is incorrectly named because it emits heat rather than radiate it. Radiation has a formation of waves while an emitter heats particles and causes them to flow more quickly, so a radiator emits heat rather than radiates it.
11 Years Ago
Well isnt that convient, the inventor of the radiator was obviously smoking something at the time he.. read moreWell isnt that convient, the inventor of the radiator was obviously smoking something at the time he named it or a little bit too hopped up on sugar possibly...strange how the mind loves to remember the least important things possible but loves to forget the stuff u really need to remember
11 Years Ago
Haha yeah! I've bored many a person with that fact, I've only met a few people who it actually inter.. read moreHaha yeah! I've bored many a person with that fact, I've only met a few people who it actually interested :P I always remember crap I don't need to know, but knowing Roman emperors now that is interesting but then I love history and science so this all interests me =D
11 Years Ago
History has always been one of my best subjects so memorizing that stuff was easy, now that chemical.. read moreHistory has always been one of my best subjects so memorizing that stuff was easy, now that chemical crap, that was one of the few things I actually learned when I took oceanography, it was a sleeping period I guess you could say lol I'm always up for random facts, add them to the mental collection
11 Years Ago
Haha yeah I'm always adding new facts to the old noggin! But hopefully I'm going to do a college cou.. read moreHaha yeah I'm always adding new facts to the old noggin! But hopefully I'm going to do a college course in Scotland for science and go to Uni for a degree and go into teaching :)
11 Years Ago
Teaching, you brave soul!! I have no patience for children especially if they act like some of the k.. read moreTeaching, you brave soul!! I have no patience for children especially if they act like some of the kids I've had the "pleasure" of going to school with, I like to help just not for very long I guess I could say haha I personally hope to major in bio someday then work in the medical field
11 Years Ago
Oh now that would be awesome :) I have quite a lot of patience when it comes to children and well I .. read moreOh now that would be awesome :) I have quite a lot of patience when it comes to children and well I love teaching people about things so I thought hey why not go into teaching :)
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That's a great profession for those who love kids and helping them but hey it isn't for everyone, ma.. read moreThat's a great profession for those who love kids and helping them but hey it isn't for everyone, mainly me, I'd be the teacher screaming at the kids and probably yelling profanity words well depending on the age of course :p
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Haha oh don't worry that'll be me one day, the teacher losing his hair because the children have dri.. read moreHaha oh don't worry that'll be me one day, the teacher losing his hair because the children have driven me to insanity!
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I swear I already have grey hair from the children I babysit, the evil devil spawn tried to tie me u.. read moreI swear I already have grey hair from the children I babysit, the evil devil spawn tried to tie me up with a jump rope -_-
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Haha oh god, now that is misbehaving children, I recently had to babysit my aunties children, it was.. read moreHaha oh god, now that is misbehaving children, I recently had to babysit my aunties children, it was fine...for about an hour then it was like kill me now please!
11 Years Ago
I had to amuse the brats for five hours, good money bad not a fun night, I ended up eating there foo.. read moreI had to amuse the brats for five hours, good money bad not a fun night, I ended up eating there food and stealing there wifi
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Haha well I did it for free! After that hour it was like, please please go back to bed!
I sent them to bed early because they were so horrible I couldn't deal any more!! I can't imagine do.. read moreI sent them to bed early because they were so horrible I couldn't deal any more!! I can't imagine doing it for free, hardwork
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Haha yeah well it was family, I wasn't going to ask for money :P My payment was all the pork pies in.. read moreHaha yeah well it was family, I wasn't going to ask for money :P My payment was all the pork pies in the fridge so I was happy as pie!
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Oh dear well if I was to babysit the brats in my family I would most certainly charge haha and pork .. read moreOh dear well if I was to babysit the brats in my family I would most certainly charge haha and pork pies now? That does not sound appetizing but if it was regular pie hahs
Whoa, great going there, yes, we sure are enigmas which can't be understood that fast, even if we fill a lot of blank pages with the memories of our life it wouldn't result to anything and it might not even change our own outlook of who we really are because we don't understand ourselves either and that's the whole mystery of it. Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for your wonderful review! Yes even we don't really know our own selves, it's a strange on.. read moreThank you for your wonderful review! Yes even we don't really know our own selves, it's a strange one but interesting nonetheless :)
This really speaks to me... for years I didn't want anyone to read what i wrote out of the fear of being judged. But I see a deeper meaning here...how sometimes we don't want others to see what we long to become or what we have been. Wonderful piece....great writing!!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Ah yes, well I guess this was a personal one, I've done a lot of things in life I'm not proud of and.. read moreAh yes, well I guess this was a personal one, I've done a lot of things in life I'm not proud of and those would be my black pages, stories and chapters I would not want others to read of my life. And I have no idea why you would be scared your work is amazing! Thank you for your review :)
Nice that was just wonderful and I jus love the last line "You have a lifetime to try." Honestly some stories are just meant to be unknown. Anyways i love your poem, well done.it really spoke to me.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I think a lot of stories are to left unknown, means when you go you'll be leaving your mysterious pa.. read moreI think a lot of stories are to left unknown, means when you go you'll be leaving your mysterious past behind, now wouldn't that get people wondering ;)
11 Years Ago
Yeah its something people always keep wondering about and thats what will make you remebered, the m.. read more Yeah its something people always keep wondering about and thats what will make you remebered, the mystery that never ended. I mean sure we love shakespeare's (or Edward Devere) plays but, its really the mystery of the person itself that has kept our entrance all these decades
My real name is John-Paul Crawford, I do voluntary work at Stroud FM and hopefully after my training will be allowed my own slot on air. Writing takes up most of my time, I'm always trying to better m.. more..