Spring in the winter air

Spring in the winter air

A Poem by Forgotten

I left my house in the early hours ready to start my day in town, yet as I stepped outside the door I stopped for a moment and I thought. I remembered something Toby had told me no more than a week ago before the snow had graced us with it's lingering presence. I told me about how he could feel the spring coming, all in the one day he had spoke of he explain how people could feel spring coming prematurely. A difference in the winter air it could be described, I knew what he meant and understood his reasoning yet I was still sceptical. I had seen nor heard anything in the horizon that would lead me to believe spring was coming. I had been bogged down in the winter weather that I could not believe spring would be so close. Yet today the moment had come to me, I was not to know whether it was anything more than a placebo only leading me to believe it was so. Yet as I awoke early morn I had felt it. My mood had picked up from the moment I arose from my slumber, the sun had shone through my windows for the first time in a long time. I heard the cockerel crow from up the road and had heard the chickens clucking. So from the moment I had stepped out my door I felt the spring in the air, as the warm breeze hit me a smile had spread across my face. For I know that this is a new beginning for me, I can feel something is about to change in my life. Yet what it is, is undecided and unknowing to me right now.  

© 2013 Forgotten


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nice...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice very nice, i advise a read out loud to ensure everything is right but, overall it was a magnificent piece of writing and the title is creative capturing the piece . well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Forgotten

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your review, I have noticed most of the mistakes but I'm too tired to edit it tonight .. read more
Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very well written

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the change of mood with the change of seasons but especially how you feel everything.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I loved the ending! It was awesome.
This was really well written. You have a wonderful way of describing things and its worded very well.
Loved it!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Gloucestershire, Stroud, United Kingdom



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