Spring in the winter air

I left my house in the early hours ready to start my day in town, yet as I stepped outside the door I stopped for a moment and I thought. I remembered something Toby had told me no more than a week ago before the snow had graced us with it's lingering presence. I told me about how he could feel the spring coming, all in the one day he had spoke of he explain how people could feel spring coming prematurely. A difference in the winter air it could be described, I knew what he meant and understood his reasoning yet I was still sceptical. I had seen nor heard anything in the horizon that would lead me to believe spring was coming. I had been bogged down in the winter weather that I could not believe spring would be so close. Yet today the moment had come to me, I was not to know whether it was anything more than a placebo only leading me to believe it was so. Yet as I awoke early morn I had felt it. My mood had picked up from the moment I arose from my slumber, the sun had shone through my windows for the first time in a long time. I heard the cockerel crow from up the road and had heard the chickens clucking. So from the moment I had stepped out my door I felt the spring in the air, as the warm breeze hit me a smile had spread across my face. For I know that this is a new beginning for me, I can feel something is about to change in my life. Yet what it is, is undecided and unknowing to me right now.  

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I wish summer would come I am sick to death of winter

[Forgotten]

I agree I'm ready for some sunshine again :)

[Tate Morgan]

It is dark cold and much like death in the air we are awaiting 9 inches of snow tonight and i dont think i9 want that

[Coyote Poetry]

Spring does rebirth hope and new energy. Here in my home. Two more months of Winter to go. I like your description and hope in your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Acer]

Beautiful write.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a magical quality to your write.. that hint of the seasons changing.. the very transformation of the world's fragrance... an awakening of spring as winter hovers over the landscape. Oh, may it be... within and without!

[Dalia]

you gave us the feeling of the new beginnings in life, the spring, beautiful write .

[Yellow Butterfly]

With different seasons brings change....

It's a wonderful feeling..

Nice write..

[saratogaparty]

Oh, I really liked this, there was a subtle plot, and the dialogue was woven into the text, portraying more of a journal entry.

Loved it!

I think California kind of skipped over winter.

[junaid altaf]

winter always has a soothing effect and i think u portrayed it well.............

[Carolann Dowsett]

Spring is my favourite season, so full of new life and hope and the promise of the summer to come. Nicely written.

[Traci]

Other than the occasional errors you already know about, I thought it was very nice and well written.