Moonlight Romance

May I have this dance beneath the canvassed sky?

For the moon shall be our spotlight,

Like two pieces to a music box we shall harmonise,

Underneath the starlight sky we shall dance,

The dance love would have us do.

Let our steps flow,

With the graceful elegance of a sapphire river,

May your dress blow in the subtle wind,

And let it take your soul,

For the night is ours.

May I have this dance beneath the canvassed sky?

For the moon shall be our spotlight,

Let my heart speak to you and teach you to dance,

To the rhythm of my heartbeat,

My love let us dance,

Until the night is no more.

Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

this was so beautiful:) Full of great, tender imagery and holding a subtle sea of emotion (that comparison may seem paradoxical but oh well haha) Very well done!
God Bless:)

[Forgotten]

Haha thank you for your great review :) I understood what you meant don't worry :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha no problem:)

[DrD]

This is the lilting, uplifting approach to romance of which we should see more. I enjoyed it greatly.

[Ocean]

Dancing is of the soul my friend. Never forget because when you ignore what is in your soul then you lose your humanity. We live, we love, we dance and joy is within us.

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

It's incredible! I love it. You did an amazing job and I love they way it flows:)

[Mir]

Excellent poem! you made it really easy to picture!

[Dr. Wood ?]

not brilliant but very lovely...who could resist such a heartfelt request

[Pratik]

a very rich poem... I love the richness of your words.... its almost like watching a movie unfold before your eyes.. Fast-faced with a superb flow it has all the classic elements of love, romance and passion... very well done :)

[MissEpic2902]

This is sooooo sweet!!! I love it!! :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Very light and romantic. You painted for me an exquisite pictures of young lovers in the moonlight. Fantastically written.