A future with you

I take your hand in mine and look into your eyes,

I ask you:

"May I look into your eyes, for as long as I should please,

For the future I see has but naught wrong"

As I smile, sincere to my heart I am happy,

For a future with you,

Could hold no sadness for this hopeless romantic. 

May your name be written in calligraphy upon my heart,

For your elegant beauty is rivalled by none,

Like a wild rose you are enticing,

Like a siren you call to me,

The beauty of love intertwines between our locked fingers. 

As I lean in I whisper:

"For you I would freeze time,

So this moment may last forever,

Within ice I would lock my kisses,

For only yours may set an eternal ember,

Within this smitten soul"

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"For you I would freeze time,
So this moment may last forever,
Within ice I would lock my kisses,
For only yours may set an eternal ember,
Within this smitten soul"
The above words are what love need to be. Thank you for the outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Lizbeth]

Hi there,
have not been online much these days but as this was the first request I read, all I can say is, it was one of the loveliest poems I have read for a long time. There were so many beautiful images, such clarity and yet such tenderness. It describes something so unique, and something truly precious.
Keep writing!
Lizbeth

Loved the lines:
"May your name be written in calligraphy upon my heart,
For your elegant beauty is rivalled by none, ... "

[Priscilla Sayers]

Romantic and any woman alive would love the words whispered to her with the grace of your pen you have created magic my friend!

[Rhianne Ney]

A good poem about everlasting love, I wish a guy would someday tell that to me... but I'll wait for him for sure..
Good poem it really touched my heart (:

[Freedom's Child]

Terrific and unique imagery. Great job in not having to use the over done images for love. "Within ice I would lock my kisses", great line image!

[Dr. Wood ?]

i'd say it is LOVE, wouldn't you? Very good. But should it read..naught but instead of the other way around...maybe I am reading it wrong

[Anonymous Girl]

Such a romantic poem. Really enjoyed it. ^.^

[Harley (arbiter)]

That was great. Everyone needs that someone they want to spen their life with. Good capturing of the feeling.

[Forgotten]

Thanks! :) I really worked hard on this one. thank you for your review :)

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

It was amazing. The discriptions were beautiful. I love it!

[Forgotten]

Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it :)

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Total commitment, stated in faith, sworn on your smitten soul.. If only others could experience this same love~ pat

[Forgotten]

Thank you for your review, you always seem to provide reviews I look forward to reading