Through the middle of the night

I arrived at the party after a four block drive, my eyes opened wide to the all white bricked two-story house as I approached. I entered the door to smell the aroama of nacho cheese, and pizza. It was so packed I had to squeeze through the dance floor filled with girls dancing on each other, and guys dancing with their beers.

 

"Adrian!!" I heard a loud scream over the loud rock playing. 

 

There stood Moe, and Rosie.

 

"Whazzup bro!" Moe yelled over the music.

 

"Out to party tonight." I yelled back to him.

 

Rosie immediately pulled me into the kitchen through the crowd, and hands me an ice cole beer. I watched her as she finished hers to grab another one. I approached the dance floor once again with a beer in my hand. I began twisting the top with my shirt, I k=noticed two girls on the other side of the room glancing at me with a smerk. I looked at Rosie and began drinking. After my second beer, I was tipped, I needed to eat.

 

"Come on A, you need to eat right now." Rosie said as she pulled me by my arm.

 

 

Author's Note

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