A Romance in Darkness

Mourning of past romances gone wrong

Hold me tight, and never let me go

Candle lights, lined in perfect rows

Just last night, I held your hands in mine

On tonight, you're a place I'd never find

 

Darkest skies, every star alined

Whispering winds, the secrets blow my mind

There you were, on top the mountain that i've climbed

All is lost, until its you I find ....

 

Can't let you go, no further

 

Gonna keep you close to me

( keep you close to me )

Keep you close to me

( keep you close to me )

Gonna keep you close to  me

( keep you close to me )

Gonna keep you close to me

( keep you close to me .... )

 

Reviews

[crystallized illusions]

This poem is really sweet, and I think it has a lot of inner-meanings. It's very deeply written, and easy to relate to. It flows very nicely whilst it's being written.
Well done!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oooh, I really like this one! It's so sweet and beautiful. I know how it feels to want to hold onto to someone or a past relationship that keeps slipping out of your own touch. It sucks but then we get another shot with someone that's 'really' meant for us. Well done! :D

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)