A Missing Piece of The Puzzle

i told my friends & favorite teachers goodbye & some in tears hugged me & didnt want me to go as much as i dont want to leave the love shared is great for motivation 2do well & return a better man

You will be missed

Your smile, your laugh

Your memorable ways

Your mentality

 

People know you for who you are

What you say, the way you dress,

Everything you represent will be remembered

 

Those important to you, and true to you ...

will remember you and smile

They will speak of your good deeds

and laugh at your wrongs and remeber you are only human

 

You will be missed

Missed by those old and young

Black and white, latino, and asian

You will be a missing piece of the puzzle

 

And the day you return, they will gather and swarm you with the love you left in their hearts

Reviews

[TurtleClark]

this is how i feel about my mom and the fact u wrote something this touching and real is amazing

[MOON]

Lovely write and tribute to those you leave behind and to yourself.

[Knight in Armor]

Although this is a wonderful piece, I would personally capitalize all the races listed. Overall, this poem is beautifully done. Thank you, sir.

[Aehr]

its so deep and emotional and it really makes you feel the emotions that you've put down on paper so beautifully

[Roe]

Such a lovely write. I felt the strong emotions in this.

[Leslie Philibert]

You have done your teacher a great honour by writing this poem, you have talent and have learned a lot about writing, well done.

[Rosallia]

At first I thought you were writing about the death of a loved one, but then I read the subtitle. It's really good! And by the way, I've been to 13 different schools in my life.... you'll be just fine, I promise. =)

[Monique]

its so hard to move. i've done it so many times. it means the most to know that you'll be missed.

[Who Cares]

Great piece, I like the meaning and what this means to you other people can look at it completely different. That takes true talent, to write about an event in your life but yet other people can relate it to there life. This will make you a very poular writer. There was a grammatical error or two.