A Lost Belief

how to fall for a lie

Introduce myself , well don't mind if I do

I'll risk crossing the seas just to find my way to you

And when you're skies are looking grey

then I'll turn them back blue

Shawty you're the truth

I like plenty girls but none like you

 

Speaking of cash , well you're beyond a mill

I hate to miss judge but sweety you're the f*****g kill

Lots of us make decisions depending on how we feel

Our actions echo out loud depending on who's real

 

Late nights of this get right

Girl I love your skin type

Wine and dine , Text or skype

and let you hit this crack pipe

I'm here to fix what ain't right

Cause I know that you gone act right

You ain't even fronting

and you see that I ain't stuntin'

Wouldn't trade you for the world

Not the 10's  , 20's , or hundreds

Known to pack alot of heat and so they call me gunner

I'm here to stay, make your day

Never been a runner

Here to share my love with you

and get you hot like the summer

Author's Note

this is a rap verse I wrote to this one song ; lotus flower bomb by wale
I probably dont rap better than him, but I bet i kick his ass in poetry :)

Reviews

[Becky Clancy]

First off, I'm not a big fan of rap, its really confusing to me (That doesn't mean your writting is horrible)

Second: I thought that your poem was really good, I especially like the beginning of your poem, that was my favorite, I hope you keep writting, nice job ^_^b

[S. Michael Long]

i love the financial conversion, and the payment factor in this poem, you understand currency between people, whether it be favor, love,relationships or work... i appreciate your honesty in the poem.. I love it! keep pushing the envelope!

[Monique]

definitely sounds like it should be a rap

[AK]

Very nice poem!

[Writing with Kae]

this was a good poem.

[Maroon Surreal]

Very good rap verse.
Somebody hire this guy to be a lyricist? Hehehe.

[Rosallia]

This reminds me a whole lot of Eminem =) This may sound trivial, but I'm a grammar nazi and I always spot errors in the poetry on this site.... but not in any of your work. You're a fantastic writer; in the second to last stanza, I can't help but read it in a rap-esque flow haha. Phenomenal job! (and thanks for letting me read it =P )

[Aella.lives]

That first stanza was so real and lovely. Good one.

[Who Cares]

The rhyme scheme was great, and the poem flowed nicely. You express true emotion through this poem. I love your writing and I didn't see one grammatical error.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice rhyming/rapping with this. I like the feeling with the love towards the female in this. Nice write.