Hooking up

Hooking up

A Poem by Forevermore

Parten my french but you are a dime , I'd spend it all on you

if you have the time , but I wouldn't call it time cause it's not a crime

If I'm talking too fast can I make you mines

We can ball out baby and share the shine , we can buy the whole bar girl ill buy the wine

cause it's nothing to me baby but wine and dine

you ain't nothing like the rest they can wait in line

Too good to be true? I will let you know

We're in to shine and we out to glow , we can take this slow

I'm not like these other guys and it goes to show

you're too fine of a honey to be letting go

If the top is your consern girl I'm down to go 

© 2012 Forevermore


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nice flow...like a sexy rap verse..."snaps too u"

Posted 12 Years Ago


a great beat you have going here........you sing? You rhyme well and one finds they can't be still reading this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love the rhyme scheme(: very creative and flowy

Posted 12 Years Ago


A nice write with rhyming through out and feeling with a girl as for the fitting title "Hooking up"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it, You leave the writer something to think about :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 20, 2012
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