All in All Part - 2

Maybe love's a mystery

It's in the air officially

Maybe it's not meant to be

Probably not my destiny

I gave my all in all

but I will not give the rest of me

And if I'm feeling down I won't

let it get the best of me

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like the meaning and the feeling in this one. The flow and rhyming is all great. I like the first three lines as well as the ending. Truth, feeling, honesty... you write it all well in this, in a small space with a impact that speaks.

[Rosallia]

I agree with Aella; the simplicity of the piece adds much impact. Superb =)

[Aella.lives]

Agreed. I love this short poem, holds quite a punch.

*psst, 'love's' not 'loves' in this poem.

[CatOfOrion]

Nice rhyming! Though the me(s) that were only one line a part kinda through me off. But that's just my OCD for words, it's nothing bad. Great work!

[Who Cares]

I really really like this one too, from reading your older work to your work now my jaw drops. I am loving it :D great job keep writing :D

[AK]

Very well written. Great write!