A Shattered Heart

My heart aching

My head sore

I'm not just hurt

I'm soo torn

I can't win

What in hell to do?

Do I give in?

No I'm not like you

I'll fight for love

I'll give my all

And I'm moving on til I hear you call

I'm so pissed

I've been dumped

Kicked to the curve

I feel dumb

My hearts numb

My hands bleed

You were my all

My everything

Reviews

[Who Cares]

I love this as well, You have solid work and I am pretty impressed. Just revise it and fix your punctuation errors.
1.) "cant" to can't
2.) 'Im" to I'm
Concept was beautiful, I like how you ask yourself a question "Do I give in?" then answer it with "No I'm not like you" It is powerful and that is the icing on the cake. YEAH BUDDDDAY :D