Once Upon A Time

Once Upon A Time

A Poem by Forever_Deadly
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About someone that i loved and still do

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I remember the love in your eyes, the tenderness with each word that flowed out of your mouth. I could never forget when you said "I love you" You made my heart fly.
The darkest day was when we brokeup. Eight months of love gone, vanished within a blink of an eye. I remember how the love in your eyes turned to disgust. From that day on we never spoke.
I remember how i cried and died, confessing to never love again.
I remember how you said you made a horrible mistake, that you werent in your right mind. And i fell for every word. I never loved until you loved me, You were my one and only.

© 2015 Forever_Deadly


Author's Note

Forever_Deadly
Ok guys I would really love some feedback on this because it kinda just stops and beyond that I dont know how to continue it. Suggestions? Comments?

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Added on February 13, 2015
Last Updated on February 13, 2015
Tags: love, relationships, remember, memories