-Captive-

A vulgar stench invaded my nose

It smelt of copper or some metal

Whatever it was, it coated my hands

It stained the slightly damaged walls

It felt strangely warm, kind of like blood

Weapons were scattered across the floor

I cautiously took a closer look

Knifes

The crimson blood

It coated the once white colored tiles

And then, there it was

The Victim…

Once a living breathing person

Now mangled beyond recognizing

Dismembered

Demonized

Disrespected

Whoever it was, is now gone forever

Reviews

[Relic]

(beyond recognizing) should that be 'beyond recognition'? A stench stained the walls is a little odd. Maybe if the walls wreaked of the stench I think I would understand that better. The fact that 'it' is a pronoun than the stench felt warm, which is also odd. Did you mean it felt warm in the room?

[Forever_Deadly]

Im not sure what you were saying because its not the stench that stained the walls it was what coated my hands but thatnks for the word correction on reconization.