Be my friend

Be my friend

A Poem by ForeverTheLoner

This may seem a little out of the blue
but to be honest iv'e been thinking about you
and i  wanna know how you been
wondering if you would consider being my friend
cause its so lonely now a day
wishing i had somebody to talk to
can anybody hear me
feels like nobody's out there
and to think that we used to be so close
now our bond fragile like a rose
do you even remember me
cause i know its been a while
and this loneliness is making me senile
so please just talk to me
these thoughts of you are only making me lonely
~Forever TheLoner~

© 2012 ForeverTheLoner


Author's Note

ForeverTheLoner
._. kinda lost track of the reason i was writing it when i started it

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Totally relatable! Loved it, thanks for sharing. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your rhymes still amaze me.

"and to think that we used to be so close
now our bond fragile like a rose"

Obviously the best part... great stuff, great write, keep doing it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I know these feelings, nicely expressed emotions

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2012
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