Alone

No one to talk to

No one to call

No one at home

No one at all

All alone

That's how I'll stay

After each

And every day

Meeting new people

But no one cares

Telling everyone

But no one dares

To help a sad little girl

As pitiful as me

When staying to help

Would no longer mean you're free

Mum is home

Yelling out loud

I just stay quiet

Don't dare make a sound

I'm to blame

I'm always wrong

She keeps on wailing

It takes so long

9-1-1

Just press send

Then wait for it all

Just to end...end...end...

Author's Note

Comments, Thoughts, Ideas...please share:3

Reviews

[Fiona Nadine]

Amazing rhythm and pattern and so powerful. I love how I can relate to almost all your writing. You have a great voice that is can be relatable to people who haven't even gone through what you have.

[ForeverNever]

You're too kind:]
I'm glad you can empathize.

[Mauricio Montoya]

this sad but somtimes its good to be alone.
Nice work.

[That_Guy]

powerful poem, good flow to it.

[ForeverNever]

Thank you:)

[Boy of the red]

great dark ending and amazing use of ryhme. i really love this one

[Emrys Realmskip]

Ohh wow! The whole thing is mesmerizing! Especially the rhyme at the end closes this piece perfectly!
GREAT work(:
Savvy

[stars are far]

that was so rhyming greatly..
but you can leave those feelings ..because after you do you'll see that you wasted your precious time in sadness.. so forget this and try to enjoy your life even when you are alone ;)
anywayss .. great work